Thursday, 28 January 2010

Scipt draft

The scene opens with the two characters facing each other across a table. She is dressed casually in light colours. he is dressed formally and looks run down. The scene starts with wild sound for a few seconds before dialogue commences.

Sarah: Hey, how have you
Tommy: (interrupting) why have you been avoiding me.
Pause
Sarah: (sighs) I haven't been avoiding you, I just need some time away, (pauses)
Tommy: away from me?
Sarah: (expression changes) yes, away from you.
Tommy: why didn't you just tell me, why all of this secrecy?
Sarah: Tommy (reaches across the table and takes his hand)
Tommy: stop it (pushes her hand away)

This is a draft of the script we will use for the argument scene in our extract.

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